Trapped himself in the dark space,
So no one knows what’s gonna to take place.
Day and night, he passes with a pleasant smile,
Only to hide thousands of feelings and said he was fine.
Hundreds of people, but had a single sound,
Others are better, you are loser on this ground.
Those words were hurting his soul,
But no one cares to know what’s his goal.
Every time he tries to do his best,
But criticised to being the least.
Lots of questions bursting in his heart,
Why is he so dumb? Why is so vain?
Everyday he thought to do something,
But tagline was given you’re nothing.
Day by day getting into the stress trap more and more,
Like the water tooks away the sand from it’s shore.
Finally in his life that day comes,
When he declared himself a useless.
In the open sky, full of glittering stars,
Jumps from the rooftop only to hide his scars.
Tired of being compared, he committed suicide,
But still criticised that he lost by life.
Beautiful lost piece mate βοΈ π―β£οΈ
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Thank you…ππ
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Pleasure always for ur words Saumya βΊοΈ
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Good one…
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Thank you,ππ
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Fabulous, but so tragic, beautiful composition π π
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Thank you so much ππ
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It was tragic and sad but fabulous work!!!β€
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Thank you so much
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Sad but elegant poetry Saumya. Reminds us always to give an encouraging word to those we meet.
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Thank you so much for the complement πππ
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Magnificent Saumya Kushwaha
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Thank you…
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welcome
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Reblogged this on Alessandria today.
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Fine work with rhyme! I see this relating to your “Selfish” post, the dark side of listening to what others say about you without your saying anything against in response–pushes you off the roof!
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Yes… Little bit it is related to that.. Thank you ππ
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Heyy, I have nominated you for Real Neat Blog and sunshine blogger award please check out!!
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Thank you much ππ
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My pleasure! ππ
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Beautifully penned, my friend! Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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